January 13, 2003
Hai Ku Sunday

dating is so hard
she will not say she wants me
but i think she might

goddess is her name
past life as a courtesan
her friends call her cat

twelve on a ten scale
my dreams won't stop using her
she laughs with her eyes

said she needs her space
stood back and gave her a year
still no sign of yes

should I stop fishing
say it was not meant to be
or kiss her then ask

hai ku can be hard
no leeway for dirty rhymes
limmericks next time

;-)

Posted by Jack at January 13, 2003 02:51 AM
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sitting in my office chiar
reading poems by friends
take a bite of cake.


hope that helps..

Posted by: Bill on January 13, 2003 05:47 PM

challenge: dirty rhymes.
girl: st. paul; likes to play ball,
takes a swift kick: AUGGHHH!

you are right, it's hard
restrictions lead to lame-ness
Now I am hungry

just came home from work.
no motivation. snow sucks.
thai fried rice: comfort!

Posted by: jeremy w on January 13, 2003 07:59 PM

setting fire to woods on a snowy day

Who's woods are these I think I know
his house is in the village though
but since he's gone
I've time to pass
its cold as Hell
go get some gas.
those matches please should work quite well
these woods of his long will not last
as I burn them down the trees will fall.

Posted by: Bill on January 13, 2003 11:33 PM

discovered your blog
only boys seem to play here
bill jack jeremy

Posted by: irish-girl on January 24, 2003 01:49 AM

irish-girl is wrong
unless I am mistaken
she's here, she's a she

Posted by: jack on January 24, 2003 10:01 AM

Light of one candle
Reveals all shades of darkness
To the Naked Eye

Posted by: Susan on November 27, 2003 03:15 PM
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